Examples help, but only if you make them yours. Here are models for common situations. Replace the details with true ones.
Direct answer
A good elevator pitch takes about 30 seconds and covers who you are or who you help, what you do, one piece of proof and a clear ask. Below are examples for students, job seekers, interviews and businesses, each following that pattern. Learn the pattern: see how to write an elevator pitch.
Student
Hi, I'm Maya, a second-year business student. I enjoy turning messy data into clear charts. Last term I built a dashboard for our student society that helped them plan events. I'm looking for a summer analytics internship. Do you know anyone I could talk to?
College or scholarship applicant
I'm Daniel. I've volunteered at my local food bank for three years and started a weekend collection that now feeds 40 families. I want to study social policy to help communities plan better support. I'd love to learn more about your programme.
Job seeker (career change)
I'm Priya. I spent six years in retail management, leading teams of 12 and cutting stock losses by 20%. I'm moving into operations because I like solving process problems. I'm looking for an operations coordinator role. Are you hiring or do you know who is?
Interview: "tell me about yourself"
I'm a customer support specialist with three years' experience. I'm known for calming difficult situations. Last year I reduced my team's repeat complaints by a third by creating a short guide. I'm excited about this role because it focuses on helping customers quickly.
Freelancer
I help small shops look professional online. I design simple, fast websites in a week. My last client, a bakery, doubled online orders in a month. If you've been meaning to fix your site, I'd be happy to show you an example.
Small business
We make long-lasting leather wallets. Most wallets wear out within a year, so people keep replacing them. Ours are stitched by hand and repaired free. We've sold 800 and 70% of buyers return. We're looking for a stockist in your area.
Numbers are examples. Use only what is true.
Template
I'm [name]. I help [who] with [problem] by [what you do]. For example, [proof]. [Ask].
Tips
- Cut every word that isn't needed.
- Say it out loud.
- Prepare versions for different people.
Where Teyro fits
Teyro's How to Give a Convincing Elevator Pitch course teaches you to build a pitch people remember and deliver it with confidence. It is free to start. For interviews, see how to ace a job interview.
The bottom line
Pattern first, your details second.
